Sometimes When It Rains

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  • #2401
    Avatar photoBucho
    Participant

    This one’s trickier because I want to try to record it as a song with the trusty old (and I mean OLD) Casiotone MT-52, so some things need to rhyme. Or maybe it’d be funnier if they don’t. I don’t know, what am I, a doctor?

    If you make it rhyme then choose any rhyme scheme you want, ABAB, ABCB, AABB, AAAA, COCK, it doesn’t matter. I’ll make it work. I want this to be as easy as team-songwriting can be. I don’t know how easy that is yet but we’ll soon find out. Also, if you want to change any of the words I’ve used to make a phrase fit then go for it. Just don’t make any of these lines 96 syllables long, that’s all I ask.

    To make it a proper team effort I feel like we should take two lines at a time rather than filling out whole verses. And by we I mean you guys, I’ll do the easy bit at the end with the Casiotone. Although if any of you want to put a guitar or sax or Mongolian throat singing solo on it I’ll make sure there’s a break for that too. The possibilities are endless.

    Let the art begin.

    Sometimes When It Rains

    Verse

    Sometimes when it rains my


    gets


    And when the sun comes out I like to


    And when the blizzard’s howling and I


    My


    feels like it’s about to



    Chorus

    My baby told me


    my


    And hit the road and


    my


    And if I ever come back round she’ll


    my


    and


    my


    And I don’t think that I can


    Or


    with any


    of


    But one day I just


    that I’ll be


    Verse

    So now I ride these


    roads with


    And all my


    have


    their


    and


    And when I


    my


    get


    and


    My


    feels like it’s about to



    Chorus Repeated

    Middle 8

    So take my


    and


    it
    Then


    my


    and


    it
    I don’t think I can


    it
    Because my baby tried to


    it
    When …

    Chorus Repeated. Probably twice. Who knows, we cross that bridge when we come to it.

    - Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.

    #25938
    Avatar photoLarkitect
    Participant

    Sometimes when it rains my life gets boring
    And when the sun comes out I like to go whoring.

    My essence still senses Bucho's women.

    #25934
    Avatar photoBucho
    Participant

    Nice start mate, if it goes a day and none of these other reprobates feel like playing then feel free to go ahead and add more. The more would be the merrier but even if it’s just you and me writing it it should end up twisted and fun and bring the sexy back.

    - Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.

    #25933
    Avatar photoVersion3
    Keymaster

    I was just trying to get a stopping point here. Take it easy with your fag talk.

    I’ll tell you what, I’ll write something for all of it, and you just eliminate all of the lines that suck, and then just put one or two back in so that I can feel good about myself.

    But not right now, but I’m feeling less than creative. Good thing I have a creative job that requires that I not be creative in any way.

    #25937
    Bing
    Participant

    same as Bryan’s post but without the creative job part.

    #25935
    Avatar photoBucho
    Participant

    Whatever yous got’s cool, if it’s easier to write a whole thing then write a whole thing, we’ll find a way to make it work. I’m as sure of that as I am of the fact that Robby would marry The Dark Knight if it were legal to marry a movie.

    What’s a “stopping point” though?

    - Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.

    #25936
    Avatar photoBucho
    Participant

    Sometimes When It Rains by The SOS Vagrants

    Sometimes when it rains my life gets boring
    And when the sun comes out I like to go whoring
    And when the blizzard’s howling and I attack fractals
    My spleen feels like it’s about to kill pteradactyls

    KICK IT!

    My baby told me


    my


    And hit the road and


    my


    And if I ever come back round she’ll


    my


    and


    my


    And I don’t think that I can


    Or


    with any


    of


    But one day I just


    that I’ll be


    So now I ride these


    roads with


    And all my


    have


    their


    and


    And when I


    my


    get


    and


    My


    feels like it’s about to



    Chorus Repeated

    Middle 8

    So take my


    and


    it
    Then


    my


    and


    it
    I don’t think I can


    it
    Because my baby tried to


    it
    When …

    Chorus Repeated. Probably twice. Who knows, we cross that bridge when we come to it.

    - Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.

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