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Larkitect.
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February 26, 2010 at 2:18 am #2401
Bucho
ParticipantThis one’s trickier because I want to try to record it as a song with the trusty old (and I mean OLD) Casiotone MT-52, so some things need to rhyme. Or maybe it’d be funnier if they don’t. I don’t know, what am I, a doctor?
If you make it rhyme then choose any rhyme scheme you want, ABAB, ABCB, AABB, AAAA, COCK, it doesn’t matter. I’ll make it work. I want this to be as easy as team-songwriting can be. I don’t know how easy that is yet but we’ll soon find out. Also, if you want to change any of the words I’ve used to make a phrase fit then go for it. Just don’t make any of these lines 96 syllables long, that’s all I ask.
To make it a proper team effort I feel like we should take two lines at a time rather than filling out whole verses. And by we I mean you guys, I’ll do the easy bit at the end with the Casiotone. Although if any of you want to put a guitar or sax or Mongolian throat singing solo on it I’ll make sure there’s a break for that too. The possibilities are endless.
Let the art begin.
Sometimes When It Rains
Verse
Sometimes when it rains my
gets
And when the sun comes out I like to
And when the blizzard’s howling and I
My
feels like it’s about to
ChorusMy baby told me
my
And hit the road and
my
And if I ever come back round she’ll
my
and
my
And I don’t think that I can
Or
with any
of
But one day I just
that I’ll be
Verse
So now I ride these
roads with
And all my
have
their
and
And when I
my
get
and
My
feels like it’s about to
Chorus RepeatedMiddle 8
So take my
and
it
Then
my
and
it
I don’t think I can
it
Because my baby tried to
it
When …Chorus Repeated. Probably twice. Who knows, we cross that bridge when we come to it.
- Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.
February 26, 2010 at 4:00 am #25938Larkitect
ParticipantSometimes when it rains my life gets boring
And when the sun comes out I like to go whoring.My essence still senses Bucho's women.
February 26, 2010 at 8:41 pm #25934Bucho
ParticipantNice start mate, if it goes a day and none of these other reprobates feel like playing then feel free to go ahead and add more. The more would be the merrier but even if it’s just you and me writing it it should end up twisted and fun and bring the sexy back.
- Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.
February 26, 2010 at 9:17 pm #25933Version3
KeymasterI was just trying to get a stopping point here. Take it easy with your fag talk.
I’ll tell you what, I’ll write something for all of it, and you just eliminate all of the lines that suck, and then just put one or two back in so that I can feel good about myself.
But not right now, but I’m feeling less than creative. Good thing I have a creative job that requires that I not be creative in any way.
February 27, 2010 at 12:56 am #25937Bing
Participantsame as Bryan’s post but without the creative job part.
February 27, 2010 at 8:31 pm #25935Bucho
ParticipantWhatever yous got’s cool, if it’s easier to write a whole thing then write a whole thing, we’ll find a way to make it work. I’m as sure of that as I am of the fact that Robby would marry The Dark Knight if it were legal to marry a movie.
What’s a “stopping point” though?
- Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.
March 3, 2010 at 4:44 am #25936Bucho
ParticipantSometimes When It Rains by The SOS Vagrants
Sometimes when it rains my life gets boring
And when the sun comes out I like to go whoring
And when the blizzard’s howling and I attack fractals
My spleen feels like it’s about to kill pteradactylsKICK IT!
My baby told me
my
And hit the road and
my
And if I ever come back round she’ll
my
and
my
And I don’t think that I can
Or
with any
of
But one day I just
that I’ll be
So now I ride these
roads with
And all my
have
their
and
And when I
my
get
and
My
feels like it’s about to
Chorus RepeatedMiddle 8
So take my
and
it
Then
my
and
it
I don’t think I can
it
Because my baby tried to
it
When …Chorus Repeated. Probably twice. Who knows, we cross that bridge when we come to it.
- Women sense my power and they seek the life essence.
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